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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 13, 2009
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When you are trying to make your characters real, start with a list of their attributes (like where did they come from? What is their background? What do they look like? What faith did they grow up believing?). Get as detailed as possible. Although you might not use all the information, it’s good to have everything down about that “person.” Do this for each of your main characters and any others that might be beneficial to your writing plan.
Your characters are REAL to YOU. Take time to visit with them and figure out how they express themselves. Take a mental walk with them and get to know them better.
Friday, March 13, 2009
Wednesday, March 11, 2009
Writing Hot
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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 13, 2009
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There’s an old song called “It’s Too Darned Hot.” I think writers can get that way at times when they write. When we are so “in the zone” working on a story that we forget where we are headed – or gallop out into la-la land – it might be time to draw back a little and view the landscape.
I was writing on my book last night and was hot as can be writing the story. When I drew back a little, I realized I’d lost my bearings. Today I took some time to read what I had down and figure out where the story was headed (no this is NOT over-editing what you’ve written and stopping dead in your tracks. It’s just a caesura – a pregnant pause).
Now, I know many writers write to a hard and fast outline. I write with a sentence-based, what-if concept that probably won’t work for anyone but me. Feel free to give it a try and jettison the whole idea if it doesn’t work for you.
By all means have fun with your story. If you prefer to gallop ahead and jump over that cliff at the end, go right ahead. There might be some cool ideas at the bottom.
I think I’ll stop short of that cliff and see if I can build a bridge.
"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 13, 2009
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There’s an old song called “It’s Too Darned Hot.” I think writers can get that way at times when they write. When we are so “in the zone” working on a story that we forget where we are headed – or gallop out into la-la land – it might be time to draw back a little and view the landscape.
I was writing on my book last night and was hot as can be writing the story. When I drew back a little, I realized I’d lost my bearings. Today I took some time to read what I had down and figure out where the story was headed (no this is NOT over-editing what you’ve written and stopping dead in your tracks. It’s just a caesura – a pregnant pause).
Now, I know many writers write to a hard and fast outline. I write with a sentence-based, what-if concept that probably won’t work for anyone but me. Feel free to give it a try and jettison the whole idea if it doesn’t work for you.
By all means have fun with your story. If you prefer to gallop ahead and jump over that cliff at the end, go right ahead. There might be some cool ideas at the bottom.
I think I’ll stop short of that cliff and see if I can build a bridge.
Sunday, March 8, 2009
ESSAYS ANYONE?
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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 8, 2009
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Let’s learn a little about essays today. No, not those staid old things we read in Eighteenth Century anthologies in college or that some English teacher assigned us. Let’s think about the modern essay.
Several well-known modern writers have excelled at essay writing. Among them are Virginia Woolf, George Orwell, E. B. White, James Baldwin, Joan Didion, James McConkey, Cynthia Ozick, Alice Walker, Philip Levine and John Updike. They used the form to say something poignant and to get a point across.
In school we learned essay writing as a strict five-part form that I advocate you learn and then bend as you wish. I’ve given you links to the basics at the end of this article. I’ve also given you links to present-day essayists so you can see what they have to say and how they went about saying it.
So what can you say with an essay? Almost anything. Here are some examples:
PERSONAL ESSAYS
· A significant experience in your life
· An epiphany you had
· What you want to do in the last ten years of your life
PERSUASIVE ESSAYS
· The influence of the Internet, good or bad?
· National health care: for or against?
· Does the war on terrorism have an end?
RESEARCH ESSAYS
· Neil Sedaka, “The Immigrant” and how things have changed
· The influence of Irish music on Bluegrass
· The real history of the Suffragettes
So see? You can go fancy-schmancy with your topics or write an essay about why you like tulips instead of roses on Valentine’s Day. It’s all up to you.
LINKS
ESSAYS – Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Essay
GUIDE TO WRITING A BASIC ESSAY
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/
DIFFERENT KINDS OF ESSAYS
http://depts.gallaudet.edu/englishworks/writing/essay.html
“THIS I BELIEVE” - NPR
http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=4538138
John Updike, “On Not Being a Dove” http://www.commentarymagazine.com/viewarticle.cfm/on-not-being-a-dove-7529
Alice Walker, “Alice Walker Reflects on Working Toward Peace”
http://www.scu.edu/ethics/architects-of-peace/Walker/essay.html
Joan Didion, “Why I Write” (excerpt)
http://www.idiom.com/~rick/html/why_i_write.htm
"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 8, 2009
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Let’s learn a little about essays today. No, not those staid old things we read in Eighteenth Century anthologies in college or that some English teacher assigned us. Let’s think about the modern essay.
Several well-known modern writers have excelled at essay writing. Among them are Virginia Woolf, George Orwell, E. B. White, James Baldwin, Joan Didion, James McConkey, Cynthia Ozick, Alice Walker, Philip Levine and John Updike. They used the form to say something poignant and to get a point across.
In school we learned essay writing as a strict five-part form that I advocate you learn and then bend as you wish. I’ve given you links to the basics at the end of this article. I’ve also given you links to present-day essayists so you can see what they have to say and how they went about saying it.
So what can you say with an essay? Almost anything. Here are some examples:
PERSONAL ESSAYS
· A significant experience in your life
· An epiphany you had
· What you want to do in the last ten years of your life
PERSUASIVE ESSAYS
· The influence of the Internet, good or bad?
· National health care: for or against?
· Does the war on terrorism have an end?
RESEARCH ESSAYS
· Neil Sedaka, “The Immigrant” and how things have changed
· The influence of Irish music on Bluegrass
· The real history of the Suffragettes
So see? You can go fancy-schmancy with your topics or write an essay about why you like tulips instead of roses on Valentine’s Day. It’s all up to you.
LINKS
ESSAYS – Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Essay
GUIDE TO WRITING A BASIC ESSAY
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/
DIFFERENT KINDS OF ESSAYS
http://depts.gallaudet.edu/englishworks/writing/essay.html
“THIS I BELIEVE” - NPR
http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=4538138
John Updike, “On Not Being a Dove” http://www.commentarymagazine.com/viewarticle.cfm/on-not-being-a-dove-7529
Alice Walker, “Alice Walker Reflects on Working Toward Peace”
http://www.scu.edu/ethics/architects-of-peace/Walker/essay.html
Joan Didion, “Why I Write” (excerpt)
http://www.idiom.com/~rick/html/why_i_write.htm
Presenting with the Best
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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 8, 2009
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I went to a writers’ workshop conducted by western author Dusty Richards, a guy with his 82nd book on its way. I learned something valuable. It doesn’t matter what genre you choose as a writer, there are means and methods of producing your work that will make it have a greater chance of success. I also learned how Dusty went over these writing methods using a PowerPoint presentation.
If you intend to speak about your work, why not learn to do a simple PowerPoint presentation on your topic and figure out how to hook up a computer projector to display it on a wall or screen for your audience? Now buying a projector might not be frugal, as Carolyn might point out, but renting one or seeing if the venue where you are speaking has one available IS very frugal.
I suggest you find a person who knows how to do this, take them out to lunch or dinner and take a notepad with you. Pump their minds for information and techniques. Then, after you’ve sucked out the proper stuff from their heads, offer some of YOUR knowledge back to them in exchange.
Maybe, as Rick said in Casablanca, it could be the “beginning of a beautiful [collaborative] friendship.”
"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 8, 2009
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I went to a writers’ workshop conducted by western author Dusty Richards, a guy with his 82nd book on its way. I learned something valuable. It doesn’t matter what genre you choose as a writer, there are means and methods of producing your work that will make it have a greater chance of success. I also learned how Dusty went over these writing methods using a PowerPoint presentation.
If you intend to speak about your work, why not learn to do a simple PowerPoint presentation on your topic and figure out how to hook up a computer projector to display it on a wall or screen for your audience? Now buying a projector might not be frugal, as Carolyn might point out, but renting one or seeing if the venue where you are speaking has one available IS very frugal.
I suggest you find a person who knows how to do this, take them out to lunch or dinner and take a notepad with you. Pump their minds for information and techniques. Then, after you’ve sucked out the proper stuff from their heads, offer some of YOUR knowledge back to them in exchange.
Maybe, as Rick said in Casablanca, it could be the “beginning of a beautiful [collaborative] friendship.”
Saturday, March 7, 2009
Novels as Classrooms
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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 7, 2009
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It’s Saturday morning and you’re staring at a blank page on your computer wishing it would miraculously turn into the Great American Novel. Unfortunately, it stays blank. You idea bin is dry and you aren’t sure how to express the one thought circulating through your head. Here’s an idea for you. READ.
In my home office, I have a pile of books that I’ve decided to study. They include Dan Brown’s THE DAVINCI CODE, V.I. Naipaul’s A BEND IN THE RIVER, Carolyn Howard-Johnson’s THIS IS THE PLACE, Dan Skelton’s OUT OF INNOCENCE and Laila Lalami’s ARC of SECRET SON. Lalami’s book weaves together the threads of a young man searching for his identity, the definition of “family” and the factions seeking to take over the heart of Morocco. I began to think how the writer structured her novel, developed the characters and set them on the road to either catastrophe or freedom. It was a perfect vehicle to study.
Here are some ways to turn the novels you read into classrooms for your writing:
* Pick one or two books that you think are exceptionally well written and in the genre in which you want to write.
Read these books once or twice, paying attention to how they are structured.
Choose one of these books and dissect it in these ways:
* Define the setting of the novel.
* Write a paragraph synopsis of the novel chapter by chapter.
* Make a character sketch of each main character.
* Outline how these characters develop throughout the story and how they interrelate.
* Is the setting a character in and of itself? Think the Mississippi River in Tom Sawyer. If so, list its characteristics as if it were a person.
* Look at the literary conventions used in the book: Metaphor, allegory, etc.
* Does the novel make a political, religious or social statement? If so, make some notes about where and how it achieves this goal.
* If the novel is a fantasy, in what way does it relate to the World we live in? What does it say about that World?
* What do you think you could have done better if you had written the book? Even Nobel Prize winners aren’t perfect.
Yes, this will take time. Yes, you will not be actually writing your Great American Novel when you are doing this. The important part is that you are training yourself to write it.
If you want to cut to the chase, look at the links below for sites that have already dissected classic novels. Not only do Sparks, Cliff Notes and Pink Monkey tell you about a book, they also show its structure. However, DO NOT use these tools in place of reading each book that you choose. You might differ with what an academic has said about the piece. In fact, please put your own thoughts down about the book and use the professional notes as a guide only.
Copying the plot of any of the novels you read is not the intention of this lesson. The goal is for you to learn character development, plot structure and insight in order to write your unique work. Whether you realize it or not, you have the same potential that published writers have. The only difference is they lucked out and found a publisher. You may have to write several novels until this happens to you--and it might not--but the process is paramount. There is CreateSpace.Com and other places to publish if you are not willing to wait for a big break (or if you have waited and get too discouraged). REMEMBER to edit your work to a fine polish whether you publish traditionally or otherwise.
Study, write and bloom!
LINKS
The Best Notes – Online Sparks and Cliffs Notes
http://www.thebestnotes.com/
Pink Monkey – A Web site that breaks down the plot, characters and meaning in famous novels. Use as a beginning, NOT a crutch.
http://www.pinkmonkey.com/
Writing a synopsis
http://www.ehow.com/how_4449207_write-synopsis-book.html
CreateSpace – Amazon’s arms for publishing on demand
http://www.createspace.com/
Pulitzer Prize Winning Authors
http://www.powells.com/prizes/pulitzer_fiction.html
Nobel Prize Winning Authors
http://almaz.com/nobel/literature/
New York Times Best Sellers
http://www.nytimes.com/pages/books/bestseller/
Literary Terms
http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/lit_term.html
Plot Development
http://www.learner.org/interactives/literature/read/plot1.html
Reviews for Riters © on the HowToDoItFrugally site
http://www.carolynhowardjohnson.redenginepress.com/free_content.htm
"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
March 7, 2009
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It’s Saturday morning and you’re staring at a blank page on your computer wishing it would miraculously turn into the Great American Novel. Unfortunately, it stays blank. You idea bin is dry and you aren’t sure how to express the one thought circulating through your head. Here’s an idea for you. READ.
In my home office, I have a pile of books that I’ve decided to study. They include Dan Brown’s THE DAVINCI CODE, V.I. Naipaul’s A BEND IN THE RIVER, Carolyn Howard-Johnson’s THIS IS THE PLACE, Dan Skelton’s OUT OF INNOCENCE and Laila Lalami’s ARC of SECRET SON. Lalami’s book weaves together the threads of a young man searching for his identity, the definition of “family” and the factions seeking to take over the heart of Morocco. I began to think how the writer structured her novel, developed the characters and set them on the road to either catastrophe or freedom. It was a perfect vehicle to study.
Here are some ways to turn the novels you read into classrooms for your writing:
* Pick one or two books that you think are exceptionally well written and in the genre in which you want to write.
Read these books once or twice, paying attention to how they are structured.
Choose one of these books and dissect it in these ways:
* Define the setting of the novel.
* Write a paragraph synopsis of the novel chapter by chapter.
* Make a character sketch of each main character.
* Outline how these characters develop throughout the story and how they interrelate.
* Is the setting a character in and of itself? Think the Mississippi River in Tom Sawyer. If so, list its characteristics as if it were a person.
* Look at the literary conventions used in the book: Metaphor, allegory, etc.
* Does the novel make a political, religious or social statement? If so, make some notes about where and how it achieves this goal.
* If the novel is a fantasy, in what way does it relate to the World we live in? What does it say about that World?
* What do you think you could have done better if you had written the book? Even Nobel Prize winners aren’t perfect.
Yes, this will take time. Yes, you will not be actually writing your Great American Novel when you are doing this. The important part is that you are training yourself to write it.
If you want to cut to the chase, look at the links below for sites that have already dissected classic novels. Not only do Sparks, Cliff Notes and Pink Monkey tell you about a book, they also show its structure. However, DO NOT use these tools in place of reading each book that you choose. You might differ with what an academic has said about the piece. In fact, please put your own thoughts down about the book and use the professional notes as a guide only.
Copying the plot of any of the novels you read is not the intention of this lesson. The goal is for you to learn character development, plot structure and insight in order to write your unique work. Whether you realize it or not, you have the same potential that published writers have. The only difference is they lucked out and found a publisher. You may have to write several novels until this happens to you--and it might not--but the process is paramount. There is CreateSpace.Com and other places to publish if you are not willing to wait for a big break (or if you have waited and get too discouraged). REMEMBER to edit your work to a fine polish whether you publish traditionally or otherwise.
Study, write and bloom!
LINKS
The Best Notes – Online Sparks and Cliffs Notes
http://www.thebestnotes.com/
Pink Monkey – A Web site that breaks down the plot, characters and meaning in famous novels. Use as a beginning, NOT a crutch.
http://www.pinkmonkey.com/
Writing a synopsis
http://www.ehow.com/how_4449207_write-synopsis-book.html
CreateSpace – Amazon’s arms for publishing on demand
http://www.createspace.com/
Pulitzer Prize Winning Authors
http://www.powells.com/prizes/pulitzer_fiction.html
Nobel Prize Winning Authors
http://almaz.com/nobel/literature/
New York Times Best Sellers
http://www.nytimes.com/pages/books/bestseller/
Literary Terms
http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/lit_term.html
Plot Development
http://www.learner.org/interactives/literature/read/plot1.html
Reviews for Riters © on the HowToDoItFrugally site
http://www.carolynhowardjohnson.redenginepress.com/free_content.htm
Wednesday, March 4, 2009
Kids’ Stuff
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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
July 21, 2009
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Writing books for children is a special market, one that determines a child’s love of words early on. It’s also challenging. Do you write books for children to read on their own or to be read to them by an adult? What about vocabulary and length? What about content? What about art?
Kids’ stuff in writing combines the delight of art and the magic of words in combination in order to paint a word-image picture for children. It’s a hard balance.
One of my favorite books for children is Maurice Sendak’s WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE. When it first came out in 1963, people questioned the drawings in it, a series of monsters. By 1964, it had won the Caldecott Medal for its original artwork.
Historically known children’s writer-artists such as Kate Greenaway (1846-1901), depicted an idyllic life for children in her books using words and soft watercolor artwork. Her famous drawings of little girls caused parents to dress their daughters in the high-waisted frocks and pantaloons of the characters.
Modern children’s writers write about problems that children face as they grow up–-like divorce and moral issues. Children’s writers have to know how far to go in these books and how to present the material to a young audience.
Below, you will find some links that will help you with writing kids’ stuff. Good luck in carrying the love of words to the next generation.
LINKS
WRITING FOR YOUNG READERS, Eugie Foster
http://www.writing-world.com/children/index.shtml
Kate Greenaway
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kate_Greenaway
WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE, Maurice Sendak
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Where_the_Wild_Things_Are
Children’s Writing – Writer’s Write
http://www.writerswrite.com/childrens/links.htm
Stone Soup – A magazine for children
http://www.stonesoup.com/
Writing Multicultural Children’s Books
http://www.underdown.org/multicul.htm
Writing for Children
http://www.writing-world.com/links/children.shtml
Kathe Gogolewski – Writer/Book Illustrator
http://www.redenginepress.com/kathe_gogolewski.htm
"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
July 21, 2009
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Writing books for children is a special market, one that determines a child’s love of words early on. It’s also challenging. Do you write books for children to read on their own or to be read to them by an adult? What about vocabulary and length? What about content? What about art?
Kids’ stuff in writing combines the delight of art and the magic of words in combination in order to paint a word-image picture for children. It’s a hard balance.
One of my favorite books for children is Maurice Sendak’s WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE. When it first came out in 1963, people questioned the drawings in it, a series of monsters. By 1964, it had won the Caldecott Medal for its original artwork.
Historically known children’s writer-artists such as Kate Greenaway (1846-1901), depicted an idyllic life for children in her books using words and soft watercolor artwork. Her famous drawings of little girls caused parents to dress their daughters in the high-waisted frocks and pantaloons of the characters.
Modern children’s writers write about problems that children face as they grow up–-like divorce and moral issues. Children’s writers have to know how far to go in these books and how to present the material to a young audience.
Below, you will find some links that will help you with writing kids’ stuff. Good luck in carrying the love of words to the next generation.
LINKS
WRITING FOR YOUNG READERS, Eugie Foster
http://www.writing-world.com/children/index.shtml
Kate Greenaway
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kate_Greenaway
WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE, Maurice Sendak
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Where_the_Wild_Things_Are
Children’s Writing – Writer’s Write
http://www.writerswrite.com/childrens/links.htm
Stone Soup – A magazine for children
http://www.stonesoup.com/
Writing Multicultural Children’s Books
http://www.underdown.org/multicul.htm
Writing for Children
http://www.writing-world.com/links/children.shtml
Kathe Gogolewski – Writer/Book Illustrator
http://www.redenginepress.com/kathe_gogolewski.htm
Saturday, February 14, 2009
Thinking Stone Press and MPL Creative Resources

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Tuesday, February 3, 2009
Rejection: A Positive Step Toward Publication
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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
February 3, 2009
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You send off a query and wait for an answer. And wait and wait and wait. One day, a thin envelope comes in the mail or an e-mail comes from the publisher. The contents says, “Thanks, but no thanks.” For the next day or so, you are in a blue funk. How could the editor not see how excellent your topic was? How skillfully you wrote about it? You begin to believe that all editors are born to reject.
Are you SURE about that? If that is true, how do all those OTHER articles, stories and books get published? Someone gets accepted. Why not you? Rejection exposes all our insecurities, dragging them to the surface. Even seasoned authors tend to question their abilities and rejection fuels thatfire.
But, here’s the thing. Rejection is a powerful teacher. Here are some ofits lessons:
~Rejection lets you know how deeply you want to fight for publication
~Rejection makes you tweak your writing and make it better
~Rejection makes you read the markets you query more closely
~Rejection makes you study the market’s cycle to see what’s hot and what’s not and try to produce a hot bit of writing
~Rejection teaches you not to take rejection letters personally
~Rejection makes you decide whether to choose to think positively ornegatively about your work
I read somewhere that when you receive a rejection you should allowyourself FIVE MINUTES to throw a temper tantrum in a room by yourself. After you have done this a time or two, you will realize that five minutes is an awfully long time to rant all alone.
So, get back to writing!
LINKS
“How to Deal with Rejection,” Shruti Chandra Gupta
http://literaryzone.com/?p=340
“How NOT to let Rejection Ruin Your Writing Career,” Melanie Marten
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/76897/fiction_writers_guide_to_getting_over.html?cat=24
“Relishing Writing Rejection,” Janet Grace Riehl
http://ezinearticles.com/?Relishing-Writing-Rejection
“Coping With Rejection,” Moira Allen
http://www.writing-world.com/basics/rejection.shtml
“Rejection: A Normal Part of a Writer’s Life,” Jason Lusk
http://writinghood.com/writing/rejection-a-normal-part-of-a-writers-life
"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
February 3, 2009
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You send off a query and wait for an answer. And wait and wait and wait. One day, a thin envelope comes in the mail or an e-mail comes from the publisher. The contents says, “Thanks, but no thanks.” For the next day or so, you are in a blue funk. How could the editor not see how excellent your topic was? How skillfully you wrote about it? You begin to believe that all editors are born to reject.
Are you SURE about that? If that is true, how do all those OTHER articles, stories and books get published? Someone gets accepted. Why not you? Rejection exposes all our insecurities, dragging them to the surface. Even seasoned authors tend to question their abilities and rejection fuels thatfire.
But, here’s the thing. Rejection is a powerful teacher. Here are some ofits lessons:
~Rejection lets you know how deeply you want to fight for publication
~Rejection makes you tweak your writing and make it better
~Rejection makes you read the markets you query more closely
~Rejection makes you study the market’s cycle to see what’s hot and what’s not and try to produce a hot bit of writing
~Rejection teaches you not to take rejection letters personally
~Rejection makes you decide whether to choose to think positively ornegatively about your work
I read somewhere that when you receive a rejection you should allowyourself FIVE MINUTES to throw a temper tantrum in a room by yourself. After you have done this a time or two, you will realize that five minutes is an awfully long time to rant all alone.
So, get back to writing!
LINKS
“How to Deal with Rejection,” Shruti Chandra Gupta
http://literaryzone.com/?p=340
“How NOT to let Rejection Ruin Your Writing Career,” Melanie Marten
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/76897/fiction_writers_guide_to_getting_over.html?cat=24
“Relishing Writing Rejection,” Janet Grace Riehl
http://ezinearticles.com/?Relishing-Writing-Rejection
“Coping With Rejection,” Moira Allen
http://www.writing-world.com/basics/rejection.shtml
“Rejection: A Normal Part of a Writer’s Life,” Jason Lusk
http://writinghood.com/writing/rejection-a-normal-part-of-a-writers-life
Sunday, August 24, 2008
INTO WORDS: An Itty Bitty Column on Writing
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"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
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EAVESDROPPING FOR WRITERS
A group of retired men met weekly in the small café on Saturday morning for breakfast. They crowded around the same set of tables to talk and to escape from women. They didn’t quite succeed. I usually sat at a nearby table where I could overhear their discussions – usually on sports, politics, family or cars. It occurred to me how wonderful it was to sit there and get a male perspective on life, so I started listening more closely and taking notes. I became a well-trained eavesdropper.
If you want to develop dialogue for your book or short story, take a notebook to a café or other public venue, sit with a cup of coffee or a glass of tea and listen. Listen to the servers, to the men, to the women, to the children. You will learn the rhythms of their speech and the topics of their conversations.
I pray you never hear something illegal that has occurred, but eavesdropping, politely of course, is a great way to learn how to write dialogue and develop characters.
Conversations aren’t the same as dialogue but they help in its development. Be discreet, but tune those ears of yours onto conversations.
LINKS
Writing Dialogue: Elizabeth Rose
http://www.scribesworld.com/writersniche/articles/WritingDialogue1ER.html
Writing Dialogue, Fiction Writing: About.Com
http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/crafttechnique/tp/dialogue.htm
Baylor University, Writing Dialogue
http://www3.baylor.edu/~Greg_Garrett/writing/dialogue.html
Arts Edge, Kennedy Center (PDF)
http://artsedge.kennedy-center.org/content/2233/2233_fictionchar_dialogue.pdf
Writing Great Dialogue: Rob Tobinhttp://www.writersstore.com/article.php?articles_id=677
"An Itty Bitty Column on Writing" by Mindy Phillips Lawrence
From Sharing with Writers (Carolyn Howard-Johnson)
August 24, 2008 _/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/_/
EAVESDROPPING FOR WRITERS
A group of retired men met weekly in the small café on Saturday morning for breakfast. They crowded around the same set of tables to talk and to escape from women. They didn’t quite succeed. I usually sat at a nearby table where I could overhear their discussions – usually on sports, politics, family or cars. It occurred to me how wonderful it was to sit there and get a male perspective on life, so I started listening more closely and taking notes. I became a well-trained eavesdropper.
If you want to develop dialogue for your book or short story, take a notebook to a café or other public venue, sit with a cup of coffee or a glass of tea and listen. Listen to the servers, to the men, to the women, to the children. You will learn the rhythms of their speech and the topics of their conversations.
I pray you never hear something illegal that has occurred, but eavesdropping, politely of course, is a great way to learn how to write dialogue and develop characters.
Conversations aren’t the same as dialogue but they help in its development. Be discreet, but tune those ears of yours onto conversations.
LINKS
Writing Dialogue: Elizabeth Rose
http://www.scribesworld.com/writersniche/articles/WritingDialogue1ER.html
Writing Dialogue, Fiction Writing: About.Com
http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/crafttechnique/tp/dialogue.htm
Baylor University, Writing Dialogue
http://www3.baylor.edu/~Greg_Garrett/writing/dialogue.html
Arts Edge, Kennedy Center (PDF)
http://artsedge.kennedy-center.org/content/2233/2233_fictionchar_dialogue.pdf
Writing Great Dialogue: Rob Tobinhttp://www.writersstore.com/article.php?articles_id=677
A Cultured Breakfast
When I used to live less than a mile from a Steak and Shake, I’d often go there for breakfast on Saturday mornings. The waitresses knew me and exactly where I’d want to sit – near the two tables scooted together where all the retired men had their conversations. I’d sit there with my cup of coffee, a notebook and a pen trying to catch snippets of their conversation. It made good background for dialogue.
As I sat there one Saturday, a dark-haired man took the small booth in front of me. I noticed that he contemplated the menu more than usual and then called a waitress over. As I listened in, he asked her what might be on the menu that contained no pork and that wasn’t cooked in a container where pork had been prepared. The waitress shook her head, confused, and tried to help him work it out. I didn’t hear what he ordered, but it made me curious.
As I was leaving I said, “Hello. Are you a vegetarian? I overheard you ordering.”
“No, I am Muslim,” he said. “Would you like to sit with me and talk?”
“Yes,” I said and took the seat across from him at the small booth. In a post-9-11 world, this might have been considered strange but I didn’t consider it anything but solving my curiosity. We talked about many things. He had a lovely smile. Eventually, he asked, “Do you feel uncomfortable sitting with me.”
“No,” I said--and I didn’t. But I remembered it.
As the conversation closed, he scooted my bill to his side of the table and bought my breakfast. I thanked him for his kindness and never saw him again. Later I learned he owned a motel in a nearby town.
The entire experience came about because I eavesdropped. I learned a bit about his culture, had a very interesting conversation and a good breakfast thanks to a very kind man.
As I sat there one Saturday, a dark-haired man took the small booth in front of me. I noticed that he contemplated the menu more than usual and then called a waitress over. As I listened in, he asked her what might be on the menu that contained no pork and that wasn’t cooked in a container where pork had been prepared. The waitress shook her head, confused, and tried to help him work it out. I didn’t hear what he ordered, but it made me curious.
As I was leaving I said, “Hello. Are you a vegetarian? I overheard you ordering.”
“No, I am Muslim,” he said. “Would you like to sit with me and talk?”
“Yes,” I said and took the seat across from him at the small booth. In a post-9-11 world, this might have been considered strange but I didn’t consider it anything but solving my curiosity. We talked about many things. He had a lovely smile. Eventually, he asked, “Do you feel uncomfortable sitting with me.”
“No,” I said--and I didn’t. But I remembered it.
As the conversation closed, he scooted my bill to his side of the table and bought my breakfast. I thanked him for his kindness and never saw him again. Later I learned he owned a motel in a nearby town.
The entire experience came about because I eavesdropped. I learned a bit about his culture, had a very interesting conversation and a good breakfast thanks to a very kind man.
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